Front Cover and Contents Page Mock with Feedback

Here are my pieces to begin with.

After receiving feedback from those around me, I understand now that the colour scheme is not satisfactory, as the photos are all very colourful and clash against the colour of the front page. Also, the contents page looks very boring, and looks like it could be done again, with more thought put into it this time, perhaps some pictures would help. All in all, my cover and contents page needed a few adjustments, which I take on board, and will do now. I am going to change the pictures on the front cover, and add some to the contents page, I am going to change some of the colours, and I am going to make the layout altogether more pleasant.